The main takeaway upon the feedback I received from my peers was to reduce the amount of dead time between exchanges and the length of other audio such as sound effects and to create an overall faster pace. I intended for a sense of awkwardness due to the decontructive/parody nature of the program but I realise that it was in excess and came at the expense of the overall quality of the product.
The characters' names and the evidence of two different social groups were also a matter to address. The characters now explicitly refer to each other's names at the start and Alex's preference for they/them pronouns is also shown in the initial back-and-forth. I intend to make this aspect evident in the web pages as well
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